My once bright shining star
Like a curdled glass of milk... Sour to the taste
Why did it all go wrong? Those years gone to waste
A lengthy prison sentence; Served twenty years in time
The only problem is...Seems marriage was our crime
Invisibly shackled... The man I so adored
Released my heart my soul my world. Feelings we explored
My love my life my everything. The one who set me free
Now a cold and empty shell; I cannot set HIM free!
Once he was so strong and proud; Injustice crippled him
Battles for clearance every day; Spirit won't give in
Our love.The price that has been payed; a system so unjust
He'll never give up fighting. His ash will turn to dust
The situation's haunting. How long will it last?
A debilitating hurdle; Marriage can't get past
His mind no longer with me. I miss his warm embrace
Just a distant memory... Our very special place.
Life's no bed of roses, but when two became one
I vowed that I'd be there for you, and help you carry on
We'll fight your demons together; cus we've made it THIS far
My life, my light, my everything
My once bright shining star
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Thank you Colleen x
Such a sad story Maddison. I could feel the love, the loss and the desire for your man once again, despite the hurdles put in your way. Life can be so cruel. Your rhyming and flow to your work just gets better and better, and your storytelling is really good. Vote and nomination from me once again! You should be very proud of your writing, great job:)
Rachel, Your comments are always supportive and that gives me the confidence to continue writing so thank you so much Thanks for the Nom too :) x.
lovely write Maddison congrats x
Thanks for reading x
Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you Sir, thank you for reading
very sad story very well written.I too know of injustice
My sons been in 2 years and gots ten to go.
Hes only 19 and I miss him.
Hes going to spend some of the best years of his life on the inside.
I feel your pain Rachel, I'm sorry for your loss of your sons years. With bereavement you can grieve but this ....
I know how difficult it is xx