Poem - 16 February 2015, 13:05 My toothache Mohammad Skati_1 This painful toothache makes me Like a fallen soldier in a battle or Like a withered flower in a garden ... It is painful and it is ugly Simply because I feel that my whole body hurts .... Like 0 Pin it 1 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 401 Rating: Total votes: 2 Tags: Accident Poetry Genre: Verse Topic: Five Senses 2 comments
Valerie Lynn16 February 2015, 20:02 Hi Mohammad! Welcome to Cosmo!! I could definitely relate to this write...I love the structure of it and how you described the pain. Nice job! Val ♥️ Reply
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI01 May 2015, 06:34 Good write, thanks for sharing,my applause, my vote Regards & Love WILLIAMSJI MAVELI Reply
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Hi Mohammad! Welcome to Cosmo!! I could definitely relate to this write...I love the structure of it and how you described the pain. Nice job!
Val ♥️
Good write, thanks for sharing,my applause, my vote
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI