Poem - 30 March 2020, 13:09

MY WORTH

I know

Did I ask for to much?
Was I greedy in wanting your attention?
Was I unjustified in calling out your lies?
Was I not worth the money you spent on useless stuff?
Was I not worth the time you spent doing nothing else?
I know I’m worth more than the pain you’ve caused me.
I know I’m worth more than the girls who only want you for one thing.
I know I’m worth being treated right.
I know my worth because you didn’t...

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Poetry Genre:

Nonsense

Topic:

Love

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Katina Woodruff...30 March 2020, 15:50

Great sentiment!
You are worth being treated good - by, everyone you meet.
I think you did a fantastic job in just a few lines with expressing the struggles of appreciation in a relationship. I think, you could really expand on the poem if you wanted to. Maybe list some more descriptions about things that have transpired to make you feel the way that you do. Or, leave it as is, it's still a good poem.
I'm just found of longer narratives. It's an empowering poem -- that is a seed to something larger.
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