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Mysitical Review

Mysitical Review

My crystal ball says 
You're full of shit
Its right 98% of the time
So I must believe 
Only actions can change 
What has been seen
Now its all up to you

If you show me 
What's already been revealed 
Best believe the thrill will fizzle
Things will go from
​​Mystical to Trill
Levels can switch 
Just let me know if you down with it
Tell you're true feelings 
Show your true intentions 
Reveal that you're that 2%

~Bell
 

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Dean Kuch

Ouch!
Did we receive a particularly pretentious poetic review, or what!?!
Hey, it happens, especially when you present your work for everyone to read and critique.
Not everyone cares to be brutally honest.
So, having said that, you'd better have a thick skin.
You're gonna need it!
~Dean ♪♪♫♪♥♫♪

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Mysteria Bell

Its very much the or what.. 
My skin has scales so people can say all they need to.. If I touch them in anyway,  good or bad. Ill take it. At least I made them feel. 
I thank you kindly for your word.
Be well and Many blessing.
?Mysti?

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