MYSTIC MOON
Beneath the shallow mystic moon
Life began playing a different tune
A pathway opened as the moonlight shone
Beckoning the way for the chosen one
With heart and soul now stripped bare
Deaths congregation draws you there
Congealing thoughts of love and hate
Where blind emotion seals your fate
It pulls you to that darkened space
Holds you.. in its feeding place
The past knocks on your weakened door
Seeps through cracks beneath the floor
Memories that once passed you by
Come back to haunt you, make you cry
That blackened place you once forgot
Will cloak your heart until you rot
Your wounded heart and desperate soul
At breaking point, you lose control
It's then you sense the face of death
Taste putrid bile upon your breath
Close your eyes and meet him there
Within the Devils darkest lair
Feel the tortured sting of hate
While flames of Satan seal your fate..
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This was a really well penned Zane, your rhyme and flow was effortless. You tell a great dark tale, I have a feeling this was maybe a tale of emotion rather than a particular place or event.
Loved these stanzas. An emotive, and well written poem. 5*s and a nomination from me:)
Hey Rachel
First off I'd like to say what an awesome comment, also your analogy was very spookily perseptive,
Thank you Rachel
This reminds me of an omen my friend showed me in her book. I really like it. Not all poems are happy or about heart break and this kind of write is refreshing.
Again thank you Alexis
Happy to.
WICKED PIECE ZANE X
Thank you my feisty funny friend
Deep poem with a lot of past actions or feelings catching up.... very indepth write..and the image is eerily connected well to it,felt both ways .well done ! Tina x
Thank you Tina nice perseptive comment
Zane you are an incredible poet, very deep thoughts
Cheers
Thank you Piusha