Naked

We race up the stairsÂ
To the bedroomÂ
Drunk and in loveÂ
Giggling with every step
He runs and dives on to the bed
I dance for him
More giggles
We are like school kids with a crush
But then our laughs die down
And the energy of the room changesÂ
Suddenly
Everything is so much more intense
It's slower
It's warmer
I can feel the particles in the air
Attaching themselves to my bare armsÂ
He looks at me
Determination in his eyes like a wolf
Ready to imprint upon his mate
Wanting the most intimate parts of me
Before I know itÂ
I am stripping
All that was concealed
Now lays bare for him to discover
The scars I thought I'd never show
With stories I thought I'd never tell
Every flaw on display
All my insecurities in his grip
My hair becomes tangledÂ
In the commotionÂ
Sweaty palms
Heart racing
There is so much chemistry
It's hard to breathe
Sighs and gasps
Grasping on to all we can
This man has seduced me
Brought me to his room
And now has me standing here exposed
All without even taking my clothes off
He came to touch my mind
My heart and soul
Without feeling the need to grab
For hidden treasures between my legs
ThisÂ
Is what it is
To be wholly and truly
Naked

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G'day, Mikayla.
The baring of our soul to someone is oft times much more difficult than baring our bodies.
Sharing our hopes, dreams, visions and failures isn't always easy. First of all by expressing them means to admit we have them, or have had them at one point and time in our lives.
Sex is easy. Carnal acts come naturally to our species.
But your poem isn't about sex, it's about passion and excitement.
It's about truth, intimacy and bonding together with someone on a deeply spiritual level.
Well penned.
~Dean Kuch
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Thankyou so much for your comment! It is one thing to be intimate bodily; it is another to be intimate soulfully, emotionally & spiritually! X
I couldn't agree more.
You're welcome.
~Dean ă
Brilliantly revealing MIKAYLA!! (pardon the pun)....... you and Dean have said it all...... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!....... Bravo ??
haha i like that one Tony, i always enjoy your little puns! thankyou very much x
This is absolutely fantastic.Â