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Narcissistically Speaking

Play Misty 4 Him

Narcissistically Speaking

She was as sincere as a hangman’s
good morning might seem
and as tight as the noose that he waves
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Yes the bitch she would lie
like a psychopath
without doubt, she could lay like a whore

Yet with no possible way to avoid those webs
of deceit she so skillfully weaves
there was simply no way, to even the score

 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

I would describe your write as not pulling any punches! I like people whom get to the point! cool write Neville.............................................Jim

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Neville

Write, cheers Jim ......................... & so he did sir, thank you kindly :)

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Jim "The Lad" ....

All the best to you Neville! hope your future is bright and you are well!

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Neville

I am fine thanks Jim, just very busy .. Hope you are too sir .. well I mean & not too busy :)

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Gwendoline

Love the dark edge to this. Also I am a fan of Mr Eastwood and his many films 😊 This was a creepy read indeed Neville...fab stuff x 

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Neville

Thank you Gwen & truly kindly too :) x

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Marion

Yep...just like Jim says, this pulls no punches and yet it smacked me in the face with its punch. You are a fine writer sir x

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Neville

you are far too generous for mere words Marion, but I would be telling a huge porky pie if I said I didn't like it ................................. thank you & truly .. x
 

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Tony Taylor

Friggin' BRILLIANT my friend!!....you are such a fine wielder of words.....the word choices woven together to create this poetic tapestry of deceit!!.....PINNED!!....ever the pleasure Sir NEVILLE!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  : )

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Neville

could a bloke ask for more .. nah I doubt it .. bless you brother Tony .. loves ya like a fat kid loves cake and rockets reciprocated ........................ Neville :)

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