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When I was too-young didn't know I was in love with you.
That would come later, and too late to do anything about.

I might complain that my poems never had enough 

   nouns.

I really did try with poems, not making them all about 

The girl who first made me notice girls to begin with.

 

The vowels came even harder than the nouns would. 

When I wrote something I liked I'd congratulate myself.

There were little brake throughs. 'Stars' was one of them,

Only, nobody knew what it was about. I drank in bars.

Read from poets now would be too obscure to mention.

 

I just wrote for the love of writing. One day, with a bit more 

Experience I would find my sea legs. The poems began 

   to flow.

An image was no longer a mystery to me. Vowels came 

Home to roost. My love for you had faded, yes,

But I'd explain away as best I could with the memory of 

 

You in my heart. You were rich a muse as ever there was.

Now I move on to discover what else there is to write

   about, other than loving you.
 

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Marion

I like the way this work talks mostly to the narrator  himself. Reflective honest. Written in a style I love but mostly fail to achieve. Have you read any works of Raymond Carver R? He is my new love. x

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Marion

Dare I suggest... Mother, When the dog died, Fear, Driving whilst drunk... too many really. Let me know what you think 

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Rory McGinlay

Relating to the shortness of the poems, (mine have always been too short) not abstract at all, suggestive, which I like, so that behind the colonial tone there's a subtly. I wouldn't want it to be all so blunt. And a menacing thing in the background of the themes, the obligatory reflection that behind every good day in life is the horror of our realities. 

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Marion

You nailed it... 'a menacing thing in the background of the themes'
so THATS  what I love about his writes though I couldnt have put that into words myself. Thanks R.
PS... personally i don't think a write can be too long or too short. Its finished when it feels finished. Dont beat yourself up
And also on your reply to Shirley... nobody can write too personal because only the writer themselves knows if its true... embellished or just a write from the imagination... be fearless x

 

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Shirley Harrison

The poem gift you have always had my friend, it takes a certain amount of difficult moments moments of madness moments of pure love and of pure hate to reflect on such, scenery you may find ghastly from a trains view or from the top of the Eiffel tower, and it takes a truly special poet to write with his heart on the page, and you my friend do it all. 🌹

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Shirley Harrison

It's brilliant and relatable to anyone on earth who has felt love. 🌹 It's your modest magic that I love the most. Never become an ego poet ever, stay focused stay with your feet on the ground and your head in the clouds dear Rory,  it's the only way to truly be a poet. 💜 
 

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Rory McGinlay

Modest magics. I think I like that, Shirley 

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Rory McGinlay

Notice how I don't believe how many people Cosmo says read your stuff?

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Shirley Harrison

Who cares they are just a number, it's what is left in personal thoughts that is important, quality verses quantity, I'd rather have 2/3 great reviews than a 1000 hits. 

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Shirley Harrison

Not at all, poetry is more often than not a self indulgence of ones own thoughts or reflection, however when you find others who understand and relate it becomes art. 

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Rory McGinlay

I think of Marion and you as the two who give life to my poems

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Marion

Your poems have a life of their own R...
we just connect with that life. Don't overthink your work. 
You write good and also with an unique style all your own. Hugs

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