Poem -
Nickel and dime, feel free to rhyme
Grass is green
The air unclean
Stay out of sight
As day becomes night
Fallen Angels are down
Lords with a crown
Never done
Even if they've won
Armies are weak
God remains unique
Peace is gold
War ice-cold
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very good poem bernd unique in its way tina x
Sweet Tina thx for your comment !! Actually it's the simplest I have ever written... But simplicity is alright xD
I thought my other (Chaos) poem I posted would get more attention cause I think it's much better than this, but it doesn't... So it's very good for me to post my poems so I get to know which are more convincing, not that I would totally change how I write but it's nice to know which things people like cause sometimes I write poems for people...