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Like 0 Pin it 0Over mountains of paper I toil,
wiping the sweat from my brow.
Searching for answers to the questions.
Trying to find out the how.I look for the right words to write,
that will convey the things I feel.
I want to show all the emotions,
remembering I must keep it real.I go through so many erasers,
and the trash has become such a pile.
My thoughts keep running into a barrier.
Guess I'll just nap for a while..I wake to find the computer,
has crashed while I was asleep.
Now I'll have to start all over,
because a copy I did not keep.All of these things that I do,
are done just hoping you might.
Take the time out of your day
and comment on the things I write!

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Hi Anthony! I know the feeling! Personally, I need the comments to help me improve my style and flow. I also appreciate anyone perspective and hope that I'm writing in a way that the reader can understand or relate to. Hundreds of people read our work daily and I wonder what they think of it but few comment.
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