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Over mountains of paper I toil,
 wiping the sweat from my brow.
 Searching for answers to the questions.
 Trying to find out the how.

 I look for the right words to write,
 that will convey the things I feel.
 I want to show all the emotions,
 remembering I must keep it real.

 I go through so many erasers,
 and the trash has become such a pile.
 My thoughts keep running into a barrier.
 Guess I'll just nap for a while..

 I wake to find the computer,
 has crashed while I was asleep.
 Now I'll have to start all over,
 because a copy I did not keep.

 All of these things that I do,
 are done just hoping you might.
 Take the time out of your day
 and comment on the things I write!

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Valerie Beasley...

Hi Anthony!  I know the feeling!  Personally, I need the comments to help me improve my style and flow.  I also appreciate anyone perspective and hope that I'm writing in a way that the reader can understand or relate to. Hundreds of people read our work daily and I wonder what they think of it but few comment.

val

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