Poem -
NOT MINE . . . . . .
By Anne Reeves
Starry starry night
lonely days and lonely nights
so let's play solitaire
the only game in town
now I'll do it my way
I'll climb over mountains
swim every ocean
just to be with you
and walk thro' golden fields
I will always love you
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Comments
Wow I loved this, a musical nod that creates a beautiful poetic love note. Tell Anne I am impressed by this little number :)
Gwen x
Hi Gwen,
Thank you - I'm flattered.
Love,
Anne.
Awww...this is a really lovely little love poem, lots of song lyric lines here, if not all, put together from different songs. Very clever x
Hi Tina,
Thanks so much -
that's why I called it 'Not Mine!'
Love,
Anne.
xoxo :)
Hahaha 🤣🤣...but it IS yours, you put them all together! Your creativity your choice of lines. YOURS totally yours. Very well done. A joy to read x
Hello ANNE!!...So glad TERRY pointed this out to me....it is BEYOND clever in my most humble opinion......it has the kind of creative jump that they still pay people to 'come up with' these days in Hollywood.....and honestly, there are not many people that can do this kind of work....it takes a 'different' kind of writer to create..... out of the already created......the kind of writers that do 'sequels' for screenplays......and tribute pieces for Broadway......You might want to consider this kind of submission tilt if you are interested in writing beyond just a hobby......I'm sure Terry could point you in the right direction.........Anyway.....sorry if I rambled a bit too much here....but wanted you to know just why I admired this piece!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!......cool stuff ANNE!!.....Bravo!!......well conceived of......and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Hi Tony,
i'm humbled by what you say.
I only post if Terry likes it!
Love,
Anne.
xxx