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Not a poem i need some help (poetry related)

I'm doing a poetry slam at my school next week and I need to read 2 of my poems...in a theater...on a stage..in front of a lot of people...I'm nervous, and not sure if my poems are good enough and was wondering if I could get some feedback on some of my poems to help me better choose which poems to read
Thank you guys

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Sure, I shall assist you with regard to your poems,

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Dammit Dana

thank you so much

it is very appreciatedĀ 

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