Poem -
Not to Be
Thoughts invade her mind with tongues as sharp as fire breathing dragons
Relentless
Tearing apart what should be into what will never be
So she cried sweet tears over a love she never knew she had, because of her mind
And the thoughts
Of not believing what was true and not seeing who he was
She was who he wanted her to be "his one," in his mind
In her mind she had to fly, only to return to a love that was lost
Never to be
Her heart he still had
In his thoughts she still was
Forever to stay each "one" and only true love, that couldn't be
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Hey LIZ CAMPBELL!!... what a VERY compelling write...... the word choices within the context of your phrasing is well conceived and delivered....... and I like the way you formatted this...... keeps the movement graceful when read aloud...... first time I've read you...... look forward to more.......ALL STARS....... well done...... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......T xo.Β ?
Thank you so much for the feedback!! I'm glad you like it. I like to make people feel something when they read my poems. :)