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Not to Be

Not to Be

Thoughts invade her mind with tongues as sharp as fire breathing dragons

Relentless

Tearing apart what should be into what will never be

So she cried sweet tears over a love she never knew she had, because of her mind

And the thoughts

Of not believing what was true and not seeing who he was

She was who he wanted her to be "his one," in his mind

In her mind she had to fly, only to return to a love that was lost

Never to be

Her heart he still had

In his thoughts she still was

Forever to stay each "one" and only true love, that couldn't be

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Tony Taylor

Hey LIZ CAMPBELL!!... what a VERY compelling write...... the word choices within the context of your phrasing is well conceived and delivered....... and I like the way you formatted this...... keeps the movement graceful when read aloud...... first time I've read you...... look forward to more.......ALL STARS....... well done...... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......T xo.Β  ?

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Liz Campbell

Thank you so much for the feedback!! I'm glad you like it. I like to make people feel something when they read my poems. :)

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