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Now let us love

Now let us love

Before I am doneĀ 
My love will be over you
But not until it veil your heart
As you are
Looking at me in pleasure of every minute
Eyes looking up...softly

Your presence is a beauty of the lyrics in every love song
You heard this before I sang to you

Before I am done I am here in you

Now let us love

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Jason Brown

Before I am done I am here in you

Within the simplicity of this poem lies an indecipherable profundity...I think...

The above-quoted line; made striking by the repetition of the first four words: holds such immediate and suggestive implications as to make it seem all the more important and portentous.

The beauty here is in the pared back nature of the writing.

Interesting, Lorris ... very interesting!!

J ;)

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