Poem -

Obscured reality

Others reality of me is this strong confident proud independent womanĀ 
But In my reality I focus on what I can’t do and can’t always get
Ā 
Their reality of me involves what I have achievedĀ 
But my reality is what I’m struggling to achieve and struggling to getĀ 
So who’s reality is obscured mine or theirs ?
Ā 

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Dean Kuch

I don't really know you or your goals, dreams and aspirations, Lizzie.
If I did perhaps I could better answer the question you've posed in your poem.

I wanna be the next Edgar Allan Poe. Is that a realistic goal?
I don't know—I can only go by the opinions of those who care enough to read and comment on my writing.

I DO know this much.
You can do whatever it is you set your mind to do through hard work, perseverance and a firm belief in yourself.
Best of luck to you in ALL you do.
~Dean Kuch ღ

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