Poem -

An Obvious Not Seen

Blinded fools do not see

That invisible shadows cross their paths.

They do not see the pain and grief.

Their na'iveness prevents them

From ever seeing that suffering.

Their pride prevents them

From seeing the truth that sits in front of their eyes.

Blinded fools only see the happiness --

A fake their eyes cannot see

Because of false hopes it's alright.

That pain still rots there sitting

With burning pains and aches.

How do blinded fools not see

Something so obvious in front of them?

How can they not see all the

Depression and suffering inside only

One person?

It seems impossible, but they

Neglect to see the demons and darkness

For their own personal interests

Or maybe because they cannot handle the truth.

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Sarah Reid

Thank You I appreciate your guy's comments and votes!!

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Sarah Reid

Also, the person who gave me a 4 star, please tell me some feedback on my poem and how it could be better to make it a 5 star. I love feedback on my poems.

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