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Oceans Away (Ending Revised!)

Erbacce Poetry Competition

Oceans Away (Ending Revised!)

Talking to me,
With a serious smile,
Tense posture and gesture.
You`ve talked for a while.

Financial report.
Papers to sort
Emails on ‘’high importance”
Not easy - I thought,

Now I`m trapped in a lighthouse.
3 poems away,
Encased by glass walls,
Over towering waves.

Disbelief,
So, I reach for the stairs,
Down two at a time,
Stone, darkness and bare.

A handle I seek,
Quivering hands that grip,
To enter. And to exit.
A wooden door frame.

2 Poems away.
Fluid. I`m floating
I`m sinking, that`s strange
In water – I`m coping.

But I must escape

Sunlight
Swim upwards,
Reach for the sky.
Breaching – I surface
I`m nervous and I realise.

I`m 1 poem away.
But out in the ocean.
Treading and dreading
I`m lost and it's hopeless.

My world shakes.
As the waters quake
Opened my eyes
Though I`m already awake
“Are you even listening?”

Hi all, hope you enjoyed! Thank you all for your suggestions! Although I only had room to write one more Stanza! I reckon a part 2/revised version showcasing your ideas might be in the waters! Thanks, guys!!!

Also,
I just wanted to let you know that this is one of the poems that I am hoping to enter into my first ever poetry competition outside of Cosmo! It`s called Erbacce Press and 1st and 2nd place receive publishing rights for a poetry book.

If you would like some information about the competition you can visit this website, it's free!
http://erbacce-press.webeden.co.uk/erbacceprize2020/4592450664

Thanks so much, everyone for your continued support of my work.

 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

inverted desert view
ship in the sky
I know ships can't fly
could this be true?
I feel the net
caught in the drag
body's a rag
I'm no longer wet!

fun stuff! hope you win!...........................................................Jim
 

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The fish of the sea

Interesting concept Jim! Hmmm, I can see an idea there... Thanks for your support!

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Gwendoline

Drifting -
Mind shifting with the tide 
trailing my thoughts -
As they soak up the sun 
Quenching on its light 
That final poem bobs in sight

Hi Max I enjoyed reading this. I just whipped this up, hope it helps at least. Sorry if it doesn’t. Wishing you all the luck in the world with the competition, and thanks for sharing the info with us all :) 

Gwen

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The fish of the sea

Hi Gwen! Thank you so much! Your always help my friend~ Another interesting concept here love it! Only time shall tell which way I will lean XD. And thanks for the luck! For what it's worth. I'm gonna need it!!!

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Gwendoline

Max I bet you do a great job ;) You are a good writer. Just keep at it, and believe me you will shine ⭐️
 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

I agree with Gwen, and Gwen you can tell when it doesn't help when he goes hmmmm!  lol!!! XD just having fun ! all the best my friend I'm cheering you on even if I enter! lol! ..................Jim.....

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The fish of the sea

Hahaha yes, you may know me too well. Although, I do like the boat idea! I'm just thinking of a way of implementing it into my work. Also please feel free to enter! Its completely free and the prizes are substantial. Good luck to you also Jim! Your friend Max 

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Jill Tait

Awww so beautifully penned my poetic friend ❤️💕❤️

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Jill Tait

Awww ❤️❤️❤️

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Marion

Seriously good write Max...hope you win my friend x

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The fish of the sea

Awww thanks Marion! One of 5 that I have to submit! Peace and calm waters too! Also if you wish to enter some work, you can find the link above!

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Marion

Thanks love...I'm not in that headspace at mo. I only write now to stop my head exploding...lol...good luck Max x

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Shaun Cronick

Max simply put, I hope your poetry shines and you win!!
And good luck to you my poetry brother and the judges see your light.

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The fish of the sea

Ahhh thanks Shaun! Though, either way, you`ll definitely know when I get the result. Either by an album of poems or by a celebratory one! Though it's a worldwide competition so it's probably the former. Still waiting for the results. Thanks so much for your support!

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