Ode to the Cosmos

My bright Cosmos, you inspire me to write,
I love the way you move and roar.
Invading my mind throughout the day and Β the night
Always dreaming about my dark centaur
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Let me compare you to a blazing ember
You are more splendid and more hypnotic.
Blessed winds shake the leafage of September,
and autumn time has the edge chaotic
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How do I love thee, let me count the ways
I love your mysteriousness and infinity.
Thinking of your wild quietness fills my days,
my love for you is close to divinity
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Now I must away with a perfect heart,
remembering your cold worlds while weβre apart

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Comments
A perfect Sonnet my friend.... a most lovely dedication and most observant poetic styling...... your ever apparent growth as poet is impressive....... and your curiosity even more so!!..... great work STEVIE!!.....ALL STARS!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?β³β΄β₯???
You are the Man Tony! thank you for your positive feedback- so good to get them and really find them encouraging- thanks pal!Β
You are a real inspiration to me StevieC - I will now have to work on sonnets which have always been a bit fearsome for me!!!- This is a beautifully constructed piece! I love it! well done xxx
Lodigiana
Thank you Lodi- you know how much I value your views- thank youΒ
Gorgeous ink my friend!
Honoured to receive your comment! Thank youΒ