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Ode to the damned

You might have to be on  the slab in your worst nightmare.

You haven't passed it all, if left you could pass away. 

But no amount of insistence could tell autonomy to shut up or shut off. 

I'm listening but disconnected can't tolerate what you are saying.

No one likes  degradation where opinions are limited, and procedure is strong. 

Told. I would take a happy ending over the bed slab any day now. 

How one's take on, that boldly non stupid. 

The private places fight hard not to be harmed. 

And the soul is confident in the comfort of the end.

No matter how we are taken, quick, quietly , or  slowly lose the quality,  ode to the questioned questions of the doubtful damned. 

Scared is the lead up to horrific.
I don't want to be the leading lady in  finality. 

But can't take what they ask, to.. so, called survive. 

Ode I bow out to you worst luck ever. 

Worse news ever. 

Worries are a bonded. 

Damaged damned, bless the, damned they have run the furthest to escape the web. 

Second option same as the first, at least I am the only monitor from now on. 

As long as collapse stays away from the damned for many years how fast spreading is the very rare. 

Who knows, and I am against their  plans for the damned. 

They are not lost souls our scar* ed  scared. 
 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Thought provoking write Liliana! I have to believe the Savior's Atonement where He suffered all things so the He could make a perfect Judgement as He is a perfect being and He and The Father have a perfect plan.Your wonderful poem brings up the question I think many have! My humble opinion. Enjoyed!.........Jim

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The fish of the sea

I really like this poem Liliana, I kind of find it like a narrative tone, which is really intriguing to me, similar to how a book is written. I wish you peace Liliana, kind regards.

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Liliana of the ...

Thank you for wishes of peace.
Yes its written as a narrative piece. 
Thank you for saying like a book. 

How are you since your last exams. 
 

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The fish of the sea

XD, think we all deserve some peace in our lives, but finally finished, wont get the results for ages hoping to get somt time off work over Christmas, thanks for checking on me! Find it touching. Kind regards

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Yiyan Han

What a daring title - many wouldn't do.

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