Poem -
Off-Limits
Eyes transmit.
Messages.
Hidden words and
Sentences.
Yearning, the bubbles bursting and I`m running out of
Preferences
Indecisive passion, peacekeeping and phrasing.
Inconclusive chasing
Myself through the dark.
Picking apart…
Because oblivion is never very far.
Away.
Keep safe.
Through the night works and I`m alone
Iced roads Â
The Traffic cones.
What am I?
Supposed to do?
Though daylight and the limelight
Target me
Like an Iron sight
What am I?
Supposed to do?
Useless. Useful.
Needed reaction.
Cause and effect
Addicted?
Satisfaction.
Needless or Nothing.
Off-limits.
Out of time.
Of beat.
No streak
No sanctuary.
A lie.
A simple lie.
That changes everything.
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Comments
Wow, great work Max!!
Haha... Magic, why am I surprised that you were the first to comment?! Thanks so much for fully supporting my work as a poet... Guess I`m just feeling a tad emotional today lol. Hope you are well
🌹❤️🌹r u in Passion of poetry luv xxx
Thanks so much Jill! Glad you enjoyed my kind friendÂ
🌹💕🌹
Great poem of soul searching.
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Glad you enjoyed it, Liliana! To be honest, I had a moment in this one, saying to myself "What would Liliana do?..." Thanks so much for your feedback
Awesome Max! I like your style of short lines....questioning....and a finale of a finish! You are a great insightful writer.
I'm reading back your posts! Px
Wow thanks so much, P! Every time you comment on my work means so much to me ;). sometimes I write as if I am talking to myself and it can be noncoherent but the emotions still shine through. Glad you liked my style and once again thank you for your ongoing support. You rock!