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OH DEAR

OH DEAR WHAT CAN YOU DO THE WORLD IS IN BLACK AND I AM FEELING BLUE. I LIVE BY THE SEA AND ITS MESS IN THE LAND OF THE FREE. OH DEAR WHAT CAN YOU DO THE WORLD IS IN BLACK AND I AM FEELING BLUE.THE SKY IS FILLED WITH SMOKE AND HAYES AND THE  SMELL AND YOU DON;T FEEL WELL. OH DEAR WHAT CAN YOU DO THE WORLD IS IN BLACK AND I AM FEELING BLUE. I STAND AT THE BASED OF THE RIVER AND SEE ALL THE WASTE  ITS SAD TO SEE IN THE LAND OF THE FREE OH DEAR WHAT CAN YOU DO THE WORLD IS IN BLACK AND I AM FEELING BLUE

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Larry Ran

Hi Greg,

Wow!  A beautiful poem.  One can feel the sadness in your heart over mankind's raping of Mother Nature.  I gave you five stars.  The only thing I'd like you to do is to change the Topic to Saving Our Environment, which is one of the two I've asked people to write about.

Peace and Love,

Larry xox

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Shaun Cronick

It's one of tragedy and never ending abuse and rape for that matter Greg.
 The rape of this beautiful blue planet day after day, how long can we as species carry on for, who knows?...
Old Mother Nature or Gaia tends to, like a spring, compress smaller and smaller then unleash herself as a warning maybe or maybe she will one unsuspecting day will have had enough of us and something more permanent than repeated portents will occur. 
A great write Greg and thanks for the heads up on this gemstone.
And I hear you my friend loud and clear.
Just wish others will hear it to and soon.
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Greg Etsell

Thank you Shaun 
That was 2016 that’s how I felt at that time and I still feel the same way today this world I was never change it’s not getting any better

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Shaun Cronick

Greg it's really tricky at present, but who knows with electric cars the norm by 2030, though I wish it was sooner, it is a step in the right direction.
And if you get the chance look up Nikola Tesla and his many inventions and what was supressed many, many years ago.
And if implemented then, we probably wouldn't be where we are today.
Up shit creek.
 

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Neville

You would not believe how long it took me to get here folks, but it was bloomin worth the effort .. because our Greg is worth it ..

And I just want to thank him for always being there for me .. Thanks a million Greg .. Neville 

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Greg Etsell

Wow thank you Neville 
I am really honored
What you just said thank you
bless you

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Neville

You really are most welcome Greg .. My pleasure my friend .. Neville 

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