Ominous Onomatopoeia

Canβt you hear itβ scratch, scratch, scratch,
trying to undo the latch,
leading here, inside my room,
black as pitch, draped deep in gloom?
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Donβt you see it, there, just thereβ
creeping close, beneath the stairs?
Hungry eyes, foul fiendish face.
Whatβs that bitter, bile taste?
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Help me, God, toΒ breathe, breathe, breathe!
Grant my sorrowed soul reprieve.
Please prevent whatβs yet undone.
Spare me from the setting sun.
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Ripping, tearing, itβs inside.
In vain now, I try to hide.
Clutching, clawing β stitch by stitch.
I must say adieu ...the Witch ~

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I swear Dean you can find the most creepy-assΒ pictures I have ever seen lol another beautiful dark write.Β Thank you for sharing your voice
Hahaha, I've had that said to me a time or two concerning my choice of artwork, Lisa. There are very few topics I'm afraid to touch on. Nothing is taboo as far as I'm concerned.
Thanks so much again for taking the time to read and comment.
I deeply appreciate it as always.
Horror Hugs!
~DeanΒ :)
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Love your scary style. Always gripping
Hi Dean, loved the rhyme scheme, I think I might have nightmares haha
brilliant pieceΒ
Lorna
:)
Thank you very much for reading and commenting, Halo Pain.
As always I am very grateful to you for your comments and insight.
Take care, my friend, and thanks again.
~Dean
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You're very welcome dean,Β
you have a lot of talent and a great way to show it. Keep going!
Thanks, HP. That's very kind of you to say.
~Dean
Hahahaha, my writing usually doesn't elicit those "warm and fuzzy feelings" many folks seem to enjoy after having read a poem, Lorna.
But for goodness sake, don't have nightmares! I would feel terrible, heh-heh-heh.
Thank you so much for reading.
I deeply appreciate your comments.
Pleasant Screams...
~DeanΒ :)
ahh no give me a good nightmare for inspiration anyday
:) xx
Wow, Dean this is an awesome an ominous poem, I love it! Hugs!
I enjoyed this!.
Suspenseful, caught me in the first few lines, and kept me till the end. Can't ask for more, but maybe scare me again.
Well writtenΒ
John