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Ominous Onomatopoeia

Ominous Onomatopoeia

Can’t you hear itβ€” scratch, scratch, scratch,
trying to undo the latch,
leading here, inside my room,
black as pitch, draped deep in gloom?
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Don’t you see it, there, just thereβ€”
creeping close, beneath the stairs?
Hungry eyes, foul fiendish face.
What’s that bitter, bile taste?
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Help me, God, toΒ  breathe, breathe, breathe!
Grant my sorrowed soul reprieve.
Please prevent what’s yet undone.
Spare me from the setting sun.
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Ripping, tearing, it’s inside.
In vain now, I try to hide.
Clutching, clawing β€” stitch by stitch.
I must say adieu ...the Witch ~

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Dean Kuch

Hahaha, I've had that said to me a time or two concerning my choice of artwork, Lisa. There are very few topics I'm afraid to touch on. Nothing is taboo as far as I'm concerned.
Thanks so much again for taking the time to read and comment.
I deeply appreciate it as always.
Horror Hugs!
~DeanΒ  :)
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Halo Pain

Love your scary style. Always gripping

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Lorna

Hi Dean, loved the rhyme scheme, I think I might have nightmares haha
brilliant pieceΒ 
Lorna
:)

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Dean Kuch

Thank you very much for reading and commenting, Halo Pain.
As always I am very grateful to you for your comments and insight.
Take care, my friend, and thanks again.
~Dean
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Halo Pain

You're very welcome dean,Β 
you have a lot of talent and a great way to show it. Keep going!

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Dean Kuch

Thanks, HP. That's very kind of you to say.
~Dean

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Dean Kuch

Hahahaha, my writing usually doesn't elicit those "warm and fuzzy feelings" many folks seem to enjoy after having read a poem, Lorna.
But for goodness sake, don't have nightmares! I would feel terrible, heh-heh-heh.
Thank you so much for reading.
I deeply appreciate your comments.
Pleasant Screams...
~DeanΒ  :)

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Lorna

ahh no give me a good nightmare for inspiration anyday
:) xx

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Kerry Robinson

Wow, Dean this is an awesome an ominous poem, I love it! Hugs!

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John DeFoore Jr

I enjoyed this!.
Suspenseful, caught me in the first few lines, and kept me till the end. Can't ask for more, but maybe scare me again.
Well writtenΒ 
John

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