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John Prophet

So much going on these days that are splitting families. 
Wonderful expression of this.

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Jim "The Lad" ....

thank you  bunches JP! I believe in the human "kindred" that we will prosper, and most will reconnect!

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Jill Tait

Awww praying this is not personal luv soo sad ❤️💔❤️

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Gwendoline

This is a power punch Jim, I read it in two ways. The family being your personal genetic family. But I also read family as the human race as a whole. And let’s face it, we are very much segregated as a species. Only once we come together as a planet can things change. But sadly will that ever happen ? 

See your powerful lines bring much food for thought :) 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Satan knows if he can destroy the family unit, he can destroy the world! thank you so much Gwen  ...PS and yes the world family,"nations KINDRED, tongues, and people" we are all KINDRED! no such thing as "race" that was made up by a scientist trying to explain skin pigment which he later retracted! We are all KINDRED!

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Marion

Wow Jim...one word...powerful...pinned x

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Shaun Cronick

I hear you Jim and loud and clear and wise words so powerfully conveyed.
For we are all ONE and should never sway or lose sight of that proven human trait and fact.
Thanks for saying how it is and how it forever remains.

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Neville

Okay, so why do I now feel like we are our own worst enemy ..
Message received both loud n clear J t L .................. and some folk say that size matters ................... N :)

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Jim "The Lad" ....

thanks sir Neville! we all are learning as Satan does his best to disrupt and add to our lack of courage to be humble and only uplift those around us.

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