On Devils
She wrote a letter on the bathroom floor , tears smeared makeup , locked door. Anything wasn't possible here .
She wrecked n she poured , trouble is calling me , hit me can I have some more .
Pain helping her see clearly the reflection on the mirror , money can't persuade time to undo our errors .Â
Why is it so hard raising this little girl ? What do I feed her mind ? Maybe one day she'll grow up to be kind-hearted ...Please don't be like me , sink my ways departed .
She's so pretty , yet best I can do is lease a piece of hell , dead broken please don't abandon my mind . Your tummy's full and you have a pillow .
Now forgive mommy she's rendezvousing with lonely , a little co-dependent on the devil and his glorified tragedy...........Now a deal is a bond , but lies never understand. She became truthless , forfeit me roofless and a pistol saying blow me . Ruthless .
 An the Devil said I will destroy you for no good reason .
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If im honest the abstract descriptions went over me at a couple of points but at the same time it's that what gave it a very personal feeling.
i wouldn't suggest to simplify it at all.
was a great read.
very deep and original.
great write.
Appreciate the words !!! At times I can be a little to abstract and trying to find that thin line lol but definitely thank you !
As long as you express your feelings exactly how you want to i wouldn't even think about it.
if anything your work will get read more to work out our own interpretation of your words.
keep doing what your doing bro
Beautiful and powerful, I loved it
Thank you so much ! Means the worldÂ