Poem -
On my own
How can life slip away
in the blink of an eye,
a childish smile
to be meant for someone else
How can love turn its back,
once was gold,
now is black,
grew us cold
How can all that you’ve given
not be seen, yet forsaken
without thought,
leave you empty
How can all, once so sweet
be now bitter,
leave me weep
on my own
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Comments
Very deep and powerful write. To read is to feel pain and emotion, very well written.
'leave me weep
on my own'....just those words put simply at the end ...I nearly did ...?
Very nice! Terry Kay
A great write
Congratulations ! Well done,
The emotion felt from this write, pulls the reader into the scene. Brilliant.
Beautiful.
Congratulations on the contest win!
A much depth and so much said in so few words. Wonderful read
Kuh