Poem -
On The Branch
Emotions
on
the Branch of LoveÂ
and on the Branch of Human RelationshipsÂ
I will meet you
only half way...
for this Branch is covered with the Stains
of
pain, tears, and betrayal...
and
...I can go out only half way...
forÂ
the Vows of the Past run deep,Â
Terrible in strength...
Terrible in power...
for...
an injured Heart, and crushed DreamsÂ
grow
thick, Steel isolation Walls.Â
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Being betrayed is awful. You cannot help but build walls when you've been betrayed. Good poem x
Thanks for reading, Being Me?
Wow!!.... Dan, firstly I love the way you formatted this piece... it truly aids in the powerful delivery of this subject matter....... making it much easier to relate to and placing a shine......a glow on those branches that scream out for recognition...... And secondly, you've done an excellent job of conveying the pain and the strength it takes to deal with betrayals wounds..... those wounds that run deep........ALL STARS & PINNED!!..... very creative and clever presentation through the 'poetic prose' employed here!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo. : )
Thanks Tony, awesome description of the poem so structure n style, like your sharp analysis...like I told Cherie, I take certain social stands about how I interact with people n family, n I was exploring the “why” of certain rules I abide by/ thanks for the read, your poems are a inspiration to try n write for me/ later?