On The Wings Of Her Attention
How can I describe the reflection of you
In every star or vision I see
A winsome look into the delicacies
Of raindrops, and their pristine purity
I can find you there, between the drops
Dancing a marvelous minuet
With sixteenth century pleasure
Courting the merriment
Of Love's delightful trials and tribulations
Leading to rose-colored brooks
That wind their way through genial kisses
And winged wishes, upon longing looks
From angelic places, like Davinci's faces
That gleam, as reflections of you
And your subtle features, nobly described
As heavenly vistas and empyrean views
Seen through the eyes of fairy tale princes
And the holiest of men
Praying for your Love to engulf them
To elegantly enchant them all over again
For, in the eyes of divine implication
Yours is the bloom of predestined creation
An alabaster ballerina, on a spinning wheel
Of an earthly rotation,
So graceful, that the entire world stops
With hopes for just a glimpse of you
Because they've seen the hours spent on your labors of Love
So inventively, so precisely produced
That when the wind blows, the music of you, glows
Like the very first movement of a symphony
Where my heart skips a beat, and my Love is incomplete
Without your music within me...
For I am shot from the cannon
Of her spirits delicacy,
And soar most happily,
On the wings,
Of her attention...
Tony Taylor
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Encapsulates a heart devoted to another with charming robustness ! Splendid work.
Wishing you well as always !
Take care. :) Hug.
Thanx SIR WATERS!!...... always MORE than a pleasure my friend!!...... appreciate your spending time with this one...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo. ?
:)
Hi Tony Beautiful!! I have read it over and over. Beautiful words
of love, stunning words and phrasing To show love in poetry
is like having a written testament showing the world where your heart lies
A Great write Love n hugs Debs xo
Awesome!! Thanx DEBS!!.....I knew you'd read this more than once.....I worked on this much longer than I do on most...... it fought me all the way......bit I finally got there after about 3 hours of rodeo ridin' !! (smiles)........thanx again for taking time to go through it ......have been looking forward to your comment...... you're the best!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?
outstanding i like the line especially the about rose colored brooks evokes a tranquilness
as does the entire poem lovely linda
Thank you LINDA!!.....I like the line about the rose-colored brooks too.......thanx for pointing that out my friend!!...... appreciate the ink!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?
Hey my bro, T, you have created a most beautiful heartfelt write for your love, written with pure sweet emotion. Loved it my man, you are the word Wizard of Cos :-)
Yes!!.... always happy to see you on my page B!!!......you're a delightful surprise... and I'm so glad you landed on this one...... I'm proud of it!!..... can't say that about many!!....... appreciate the ink brother poet!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS !!.....T xo. ?
Wow. This is so beautifully magical. So descriptive, yet not verbose. Really a gorgeous write, Tony.
Thanx so much KASSIE!!.....so glad you stopped by my friend...... appreciate the positive ink!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo. ?
awesome T beautiful write
Thanx DARKLY!!.... been enjoying the heck outta your stuff lately as well!!....... appreciate the ink!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?
T, this is terrific reading, fresh and rich, definitely one of the best poems I've read in the last 24 hours; I was on a poetry binge last night on a site featuring the top 100 poems of all time, (poetrysoup.com) Keats, Dickerson, Woodsworth, Shakespear, Burns...just to name a few, your syntax is such a compliment to the genre, love that....when an artist has such great talent and takes his craft seriously, he can inspire, honestly I feel that old cliche applies with this write, 'the high tide lifts all boats'...the tone in this is brilliant, bye the way.... felt the passion, emotional pull is so powerful...the pull quote is; what can I say? perfect....hey, thanks for posting, this honors all true poets on this or any poetry community....tribute
Like the very first movement of a symphony
Where my heart skips a beat, and my Love is incomplete
Without your music within me...
Chris!!. man oh man!!..... this is like ~ the greatest comment..... of all time..... to put me in the same paragraph with the aforementioned writers and poets is beyond my ability to even breathe!!......I know you have an enormous library of poetry in your head..... and I know that you are among the few who actually read the great poets...... so for me..... your comment must be printed out and framed!!...... just so I can bust it out at parties!! LOL!!...... so I can say.....SEE!!!...."I coulda been a contender!!"....... seriously, I can't thank you enough brother poet!!...... my most humble thanks!!........ kisses!!.......T xo. ?
This is awesome Tony.....had to read it twice....you sure have a way of making words come alive...really enjoyed this
Lots of love
Thanx ROSE!!....... so glad you read it more than once...... means a LOT to me..... worked hard on this one....... you're pretty groovy girlfriend!!......thanx again for this....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo. ?
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
She dances in the rainfall, yet, deftly, not a drop touches her lithe body. The most perfect portrayal in history, La Giaconda, the Mona Lisa, now hangs in the Gallery of His Soul. Millions have gazed upon her, yet her love is reserved for but one. Her hearts symphony plays only for him. The music of her soul is composed and dedicated to only him. Together they soar on the "Wings of Her Attention".
Peace, Love and Rockets,
xox Larry
beautiful . I have goose bumps . love is so precious . this poem so beautifully written moved my soul. thankyou x
Thanx so much MAGGIE!!....... dry cool of you to go back and fi d this write....... appreciate the time and the ink my friend!!........a lovely comment....... thank you!!........ smiles......T xo. ?