Poem -

On Waking Up in Rio

When we eventually
woke up in Rio,
my hands felt too big
and my feet
looked so very small ..
Until I lifted
my head and I realised ..
We had somehow fallen
asleep on the way, top to toe ..

 

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Marion

I had a vivid picture of this in my mind...what a poetic way to.describe ...a tangle...brilliant x

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Neville

Bless ya .. Just wish you had been there M x

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Neville

thank you Tina .. just wish you had been there too .. would like to think I may have had you in knots x

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