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One more time

One more time

Learn, live,
love, give,
me, you, 
us too,
one breath,
final death,
can't see,
ain't me,
chained to wall,
watch me fall,
tears drop,
won't stop,
lost love,
it's way to much,
blinded by this,
dearly missed,
I'll try so much harder,
not my departure,
abolished tears,
no ones here,
I'll keep waiting,
thinking, debating,
close your eyes,
one more time.

*Something I wrote in 2006 after experiencing my first heart break, as well as my first loss.
It's nothing special, creative, or share worthy, but I wanted to share it since it was once of the first poems I ever wrote.  

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Syd

Hi Danielle, you say this is nothing special but for a first poem it's good. A lot more coherent than my first poem. Thanks for sharing - Syd 

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