Poem -
Oniyuri
Titian regal bells
Botanical cadence dwells
Chaotic emblazon row
Lilies blatantly grow
Vivid florid verbose
Amid kindred pose
Tigress singularly girder
Assassin of rival verdure
Ambrosial aromas surmise
Guileful blossom guise
Random ebon speckles
Cherubs bedeck freckles
Lithe grandeur state
Flamboyantly congregate
Cordial amongst its own
Align midst cobblestone
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Wow! if this is what my nature poem has to go up against, I'm in serious trouble! I love those last two stanzas the most! Wonderful!
thank you, Jim, I changed the last two paragraphs it just didn't sound right when I read it out loud.
AHHHH! LOL! where did those last two stanzas go ? give them to me! lol! still wonderful!
lol I hate to be the bearer of bad news but I'll probably change this about a million times before I'm somewhat satisfied lol Must be the OCD in me
You just like to see me dance! lol!
Maybe
Utterly magnificent. Enjoyed it a lot. Kind regards. Your friend, The Fish of the Sea.
thank you fish
Thought I missed your new poem because of the change in the picture XD! again utterly fantastic, how do you manage to have such a vast vocabulary?? It always intrigues me Lisa! Kind regards, the Fish of the Sea.
There is an old saying that goes: Only an arrogant person professes to know it all... a humble person knows there is always something new to learn. I read quite a bit. so I guess vocabulary is something I take to easily. Horrible at math but smart with words....
It's really a balance, isn`t it? I wish I had more time to read these days, always on the go... but I can say one up on me, horrible at words and Math! haha lol. All just a learning process, another quote Even after school, you never stop learning new things. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
I did add a new one.
Just saw it! checking now! ;)
Smiles!
Beautiful flowers, lillies. You have done justice to them in this poem of yours x
Thank you Tina
Fabulous...like all your writes Lisa...I am awe...π
Thank you for your support Marion