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Only you can make the final call

Only you can make the final call

People say you should do this, you should do that
But that's like letting someone tell you, you're fat
Asking for others opinion is risky
As it gets a bit tipsy
Hear what you want to hear
Listen when you're not listening
Take in their thoughts
Process everything they said for yourself
Only you can make the final call
Don't let them make the final call
The bells are ringing
People are running
Time is ticking
Pressure is leisure
Relax and say "I'll think about it"
Don't let yes or no answers be your end game
You can do better than that

 

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Dean Kuch

❝But that's like letting someone tell you, [your] you're fat❞ →I think you meant "you're" here, Capricorn; a contraction meaning "you are". You have the possessive form—or  "your"—used here instead...

In anything we do artistically in life—whether it be painting, writing prose, or poetry—it's always important to remain true to who we are. People are going to form their own opinions of what it is you do, especially if you put it "out there" for critique. And, if you DO, you'd better have a very thick skin. Not everyone is going to like what it is you do.
If you believe in what you're doing you can never go wrong.
Nicely penned.
Have a grrrrrrrreat weekend...
~Dean Kuch

 

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