Open coffin
Open coffin….. I rest for now
Died heart broken somehow
Why does love bring pain
Why does sunshine bring rain
Where did real love go
Why does time pass by slow…when your low
How do we move on
When what makes us strong….is forever gone
It was hard trying to pull through
Trying to live my life minus…you
Time and time again I hurt
So now I’m taking this pain with me to the dirt
Open coffin….I rest for now
Died heart broken somehow
With love pain follows
Sometimes too hard to bottle up…yet swallow
True love doesn’t exist
In the end we all get pissed
So how do we make it to the next day
When in our hearts we really wanted love to stay
It’s hard trying to make it
Life without you….I cant take it
Time and time again…too often
Died heart broken…open coffin!
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Morris all i can say is (WOW). Got that question to throw at you again..Do you sing,you know i don't and can't but reading this, makes me feel like i can...The words is there all i need is the effort...This stuff is powerfully fresh...You got it going on...
JimÂ
I do not have the voice for singing, i just ove writing
This sounds like it would go good as a rap/hip hop song. It flows like a rapper would so was that the intention?
no that wasnt the intention
Alicia,
I think Morris is extremly modest and i too feel his vibes and if the right people get a chance to view this...well Mr.Derry will be off to the races....This isn't good it's as Tony the tiger would say,"This is Great" all of it...
Jim
Wow Jim Thanks for the supportive words
Yeah I really like the way this poem flows it is a great poem and would make a wonderful song. So keep on writing your great at it!
Congrats... to you, the winner and
all other winners of April, as well.
If a poem makes you feel something- it did what it's meant to do. You're speaking of a lost love- you also cried for me. I lost my mom when I was 15- my dad when I was 18. Open coffin- deep! Thank you.
Thank you for your kind words... Open Coffin is one of my personal favorites. I first want to say that i am sorry for your loss. I write not only for myself but for those who read, that they may find some kind of comfort and peace with in my words, as I do. so NO thank you! :)