Poem -
Open Field
Sitting in an opened field
Trying to flee from burdens
Sweet birds singing
Fresh breeze keeps blowing
Sky decorated with pretty cloud
Sun shining out of it so proud
Flowers blossomingÂ
Cute bunnies hoppingÂ
Beautiful butterfly surfing the wind
Ants building in the sand
The refreshing smell of rain
The comfort of a colorful rainbow
Gaining strength and having a clear mind
Enjoying the beautiful therapy of an open field
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Nice piece..specially on a cold wet miserable day like today, IMO the flow could be helped by getting rid of all those "The" at the start of lines
i recently took up hiking, an have to agree how therapeutic it can be...liked this :)
Hello Twisted, thanks for dropping by. I'm glad you enjoy the read. Cheers.
You are a talented writer my friend. Just do what you do.Â
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Hi Grant, thanks a lot for your love and support. I truly appreciate it. Cheers.
Hey cleo .a great write. There is nothing like being outside among nature and feeling free of your burdens and stress . It is a relief. Hugs to you rockÂ
Thanks a lot Rock, I totally agree. warm regards. Cheers.
Hello Cleo...
Beautiful imagery!Â
Very peaceful!
Enjoyed!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongÂ
Hi Sparrowsong,I'm glad you enjoyed it. Cheers.
Nature puts us in contact with peace, with the beauty of big things and small things, the Sun and the clouds on a small Ant and a blue butterfly that flies on boils it green and fresh flowers.
Nature is always a very good therapy for debugging mind all gaps and all doors, a very good therapy which is also free.
A greeting.
Hi Lucas, that's so true, it's the best free therapy. Cheers.