Opus 13

Fate interceded when I saw your face
Every ordinary word you spoke
Found a home, a pillar in my soul
Yet I wish Iād never seen you
known you,
Touched your face, heard your
Point of view, a taste of heaven
Is what Iād found in you, and never knew
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hey, D, yes you are right, I didn't edit this one, just wanted to know if I could get away with something right from the heart, I write poetry to 'cope' Ā and sometimes there is no 'connection' with the readers...I suppose there is a risk in that, but so be it, it really is how I feel about a 'relationship' I had, with great potential doomed by circumstance, maybe one day it will all make sense, who knows....I thank you for your kind words that encourage, and I know it is very ambiguous, to me also, in may ways, lol... Ā hugs bro.
This is so achingly beautiful. Deep emotion and longing vibrate throughout your words.Ā
Very much enjoyed.Ā
thanks, SoulWhispers, I fell in love with someone about 4 years ago who is way too practical, when it comes to the subject, lol....all i can do is write out my feelings; sometimes it feels like a curse, thanks for commenting, though I wish I understood more than i do, especially about 'love' ...life is strange and sometimes things don't work out....cheers poet, I love your work...be well
Sometimes words spoken directly from the heart say more than a volume of books..... your mind wants to expunge but your heart wont let you..stay strong my friend x
Lodigiana
thanks for 'insightful' comment, Iodigiana, and I will try, cheers