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Our trip of a lifetime❤️

Our trip of a lifetime❤️

Rockin’ and a’ rollin’ on a ride to see the stars, we called in at Jupiter and stayed at while at Mars..But the aliens were antagonistic so our driver pulled away, and chugged us along the tracks of Orbit to rid that hostile display..

Saturn was sensational as it spun like a wheel, but everybody felt a trifle nauseated watching the outer ring reel..Venus was so beautiful as we looked down from up above, there was absolutely no mistaking why this was named the Goddess of love..Mind you, I wasn’t overly keen on Mercury with it’s grey, drab colour, even when we watched it shining from the Sun, it appeared to look duller..

Wasn’t our roller-coaster ride exceptional, an awesome trip of a lifetime, looking down on our own planet Earth was an extravaganza so sublime..Well by now we were getting tiresome beside the man in the moon, when we politely asked our train driver if we could go home soon..Of course we passed by Uranus which is the seventh planet from the Sun, then our driver stoked up his steam engine and took us back to where we had begun..

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Jill Tait

Thank you Greg as always you support me 💙❤️💙❤️💙❤️💙

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Jill Tait

Awww Thank you so pleased you enjoyed luv ❤️💕❤️

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Marion

Only you!!!I really feel.like I've been on a roller coaster day out ..lol..fantastic write Jill...pinned 💕

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Jill Tait

Awwww 🤣💕have u found your poem I wrote xxx

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Being Me

Ohhh...I LOVE this, Jill. What a fantastic trip that would be. I have to say, your imagination  shines in this! Fabulous and pinned x

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Jill Tait

Aww I did enjoy thisun luv on this dreary damp day I was lost in my trip of a lifetime lol ❤️❤️❤️

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