"Our World"

This amazingly created world is so shamefully full of lies, judgement, and hate.
Why do we choose not to live life, before it is too late?
Us gorgeous woman choose to wear make-up that covers the natural God given beauty of our own face.
Why must this be the case?
Wearing hardly any clothing at all just to catch an eye.
We need to have more self-respect, self-morals, or at least try.
We cheat on the ones whom we say we love.
Not even close to being thankful that they are a blessing from our heavenly father above.
We lie straight to your face without blinking a eye.
Living with no regrets, even though we know we are living a lie.
We call each other very harsh names, showing no love at all.
An do not even mind watching our loved ones sadly fall.
We see our people who need help all the time.
But yet, offering help doesn't even cross our mind.
Not until we hit rock bottom and we are caught up in a bind.
We are so quick to judge you.
And do we know you, have not a clue.
Not thinking once, what you may have gone through.
Now days it is all about money, sex, cars, and fame.
Instead of Jesus, God, family, and love, I know it is quite a shame.
We could literally have everything we want and need, and it still not be enough.
Being so ungrateful, selfish, and not realizing who really has it rough.
But those ones who usually have it the roughest,are the ones who love and appreciate.
The ones who choose to live life, before it is too late.
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Great question
"Why do we choose not to live life, before it is too late?"
I've watched this so many times in my life, the regrets people i care about have, it's sad,
i love this line,
"But those ones who usually have it the roughest,are the ones who love and appreciate"
thank you Christy for sharing such a beautiful heartfelt write, much love nardine xoxo
Aww... well thank you very much. That is what I love doing is writing from the heart, writing truth, positivity, and I love to open ones eyes. Thank you for reading my poem. Much love back to you xoxoxoxo.....
What an excellent write.
I wish more people would view the world the way you do. So many positive
messages in here. Love it!
Val â„
Well thank you very, very much. Very kind of you. Thank you very much for reading...
Great write, my dear Poetess Christy Bozeman, my applause, my love, my vote, I love the below lines, Added this to my favorite, Hopefully, I can appreciate and feature this poem through my column POET'S PEN, if you permit me to do so,
Regards, Love
WILLY
I sure do not mind at all.. Feel free to feature my poem through POET'S PEN. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for reading, and voting for me. :)
Thanks for reading susan. You are so right. I am sorry you have seen this. May god bless you.
Wow Christy Bozeman!!!......don't think I've read you before............but I will.........this is truly ,spiritually, uplifting to see in words........because I can't tell you how many times I have had this EXACT conversation with a room full of beautiful souls (3 sisters, Mom, Omi...)...........it seems that ALL women (and many men, aside from the clothing thing) would TOTALLY agree with these Gracefully delivered poetic phrases..........but there seems to be this HUGE rift between understanding and doing..........and I think it's ALL driven by the mass media (bloodsucking scum-bags if you ask me)...........big billboards and television programming propelled by make-up covered, scantily clothed women........a sad state of affairs............especially in a household of MOSTLY women.............SORRY to talk your head off..........I just happen to believe that women are much MORE attractive with no make-up.........and MORE clothes (leaves more to the imagination, and hence more titillatingly attractive)............VERY profound and though-provoking write my friend............well done...........smiles.........TÂ xx
Thank you very much Tony Taylor. Pleasure to meet you as well. I agree that woman and men both are much mire beautiful when they dress decent and act decent. As you have said leaves more to the imagination. Thank you for reading my poem. I love poetry with a passion. I am also a singer, and sing writer. Well not famous or anything. I rather not live rich, live more just money, and be all about myself. If I were to ever follow my dreams I would want to be a lot like Rich Mullins. He asked for minimum wage only, and the rest to go to the churches and other charities. Which was f=ver awesome of him. And til the day he died he never knew exactly how much he really made. Because money corrupts people. :)
Hey Christy!!........I LOVE Rich Mullins..........the way he talks on stage between songs..........I too am a song writer by profession.............and I am Vigilant fighter for God's greater good............I too believe in minimizing the importance of monetary gain............I have actually LOST friends over this belief..........But.......God has blessed me in so many other ways...........It's truly extraordinary to give yourself over ..........completely............in faith............it changes you into what you didn't think was possible...........and when that happens..........your music becomes more than yourself..........I LOVE that I met you..........perhaps we could trade songs or something............would LOVE to hear something.......smiles...........TÂ xx
I do have a music page, where I have done covers. If you would like to check them out you can go to my Facebook and type Christy Bozeman in the search area and it should take you straight to my music page. I do have my own songs just have not put them out yet.
Hi Christy Bozeman,
Your poem is now being featured and promoted on our FB page.Â
Congrats from the CosmoFunnel team.Â
Glide on love.
Wow thank you very much... It is a honor. Thank you so very much my CosmoFunnel friends. Can I ask why though? This must be a good thing right?
All I can say is wow.;-)Â
Thank you norman. Thanks for reading my dear friend. :)
You are truly a angelic person very admirable gladto have a good friend like you Christy ;-) God bless your beautiful soul. Xoxo
Oh my you make me want to cry thank you very much Norman. God bless you too my dear friend.
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Hope they are tears of joy ;-)Â
Congratulations sweetheart:) xoxo
Thank you mam :) <3
Thank you all for reading my poetry. I really do appreciate just you all reading it. It really means a lot to me.God bless you all :) <3
I love this very true in all levels. Great job, if we can just become this essay. OneLove thank you for sharing :)
Well thank you very much for the lovely comment, and thank you for taking the time to read my dear friend. Wouldn't it be awesome if we could become this. But we live and we learn. That is if we choose too. :)
Yes it is... Thanks for reading friend.
Thought provoking write, Christy...a poem like this is not easy to write and not come across negative and dark and preachy, but you're very talented and there exists such an optimistic 'tough love' tone throughout...no illusions or flowery clichés to insult the grown up mind...this is quality work, very sobering in its construction...I'm thankful that I had a chance to appreciate it....extremely high quality
Hey Christopher,
Nice to meet you. Thank you very much for appreciating and reading my poem. It really means a lot to me. I love expressing my feelings through my writing. Again thank you very much. May God bless you my friend.