Poem -
Out of Valence
The one I still love...
softly The space around you:
turned to chaos
The Group 1 atoms had 3 valence electrons
Group 2 atoms had 1
Group 3 had 2
And you were your father and mother:::: The Smothering valences
sadly
Not yourself
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Hey MARK!!.... this is VERY cool brother!!......I know valence has something to do with immunology...... so I looked it up...... and it said that it was the way someone could affect another person in a very special way........ so as I read your poem it made more creative sense........ you choose some VERY interesting subject matter...... and deliver VERY enigmatically ........thanx for this........I Love to learn things.......ALL STARS!!...... well done brother poet!!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?☀✴✳
Thanks Tony ....Its a Reversal;;;;; of the way someone could affect another person in a very special BAD way...
1..look at as a weak person taking on winning personalty of someone else..Father Mother older Brother Etc..etc...
2.And maybe a women wearing a black veil but hates it but wears it cause that is just what she was told to do
Thanx MARK!!......thanx for clarifying it for me..... makes it that much better!!....... high fives brother!!.......T xo. ?☀✴✳
Tony-I am sure you knew this crafty smart poet...Kool ===just in case others may be what the hell does this guy mean...