Poem -
Over Thinking
I'm over thinking ,over talking
But only to my self
I'm constantly mulling over ,the state of my own health
To be honest it's not good
To be honest it's not great
I find my self selflessly over whelmed
More each and every passing day
I admit responsibility, I admit it's in my mind
I admit it's all my fault every freaking time .
This is a cry for HELP.
One I doubt you'll ever see
Because this fake smile districts you ,From the true me
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Hey Marc Jones!!......I LOVE this write!!..........I relate to every single moving word of this...........it's well delivered through it's own apparent confusion..............these words are a beautiful painting of the soul of it's author.........honesty drips from it's formatting to it's word choices.............I have been battling a VERY bizarre disease and these words remind me of when I first arrived here .........in this amazingly supportive community of writers...........you've landed in the right place brother...........and I am so impressed with your obvious gift for using the English language for self-expression...........well done.........and........WELCOME to COSMO!!............Love and Rockets!!.............T xo
Thanks man :) I really do appreciate the positive feedback. I'm really glad you liked it . Hope your doing well my friend