Poem -
Self reflection
Broken and dead lost inside , pain once hidden I can no longer hideĀ
Iāve grown tired of this world empty cold. Iām just begin for the end before Ā my storey has been truly toldĀ
and so I sit and think . And drift of into trance .
enough is enough I have no fight left, kill myself ? Maybe thatās for the bestĀ
see I always though one day Iād win , wake up and rise above the demons the dwell in the depths withinĀ
I guess itās nothing but a wish a form of hopeless thinking . I dream Iāll never see reached
so know Iāll just take these pills and slip off into the breachĀ
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Hello, thanks for sharing your poem. I've written a lot about depression.
Favorite line:Ā
Broken and dead lost inside , pain once hidden I can no longer hideĀ
To make it read better, I would tighten up the punctuation and capitalization since there are long sentences throughout.Ā
There is one misspelling:Ā my storey (story) which is an easy fix.Ā
Thank you for sharing your poem. Made me think about all the times I had dark thoughts. It took the combination of: diet, exercise, reaching out to loved ones, writing, medication and prayer to over come depression. However, I still become depressed, it's changed from total darkness to a window full of light shining in.Ā
Good luck to you.Ā
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