Poem -

Self reflection

Self reflection

Broken and dead lost inside , pain once hidden I can no longer hideĀ 

Iā€™ve grown tired of this world empty cold. Iā€™m just begin for the end before Ā my storey has been truly toldĀ 

and so I sit and think . And drift of into trance .

enough is enough I have no fight left, kill myself ? Maybe thatā€™s for the bestĀ 

see I always though one day Iā€™d win , wake up and rise above the demons the dwell in the depths withinĀ 

I guess itā€™s nothing but a wish a form of hopeless thinking . I dream Iā€™ll never see reached

so know Iā€™ll just take these pills and slip off into the breachĀ 

Ā 

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Katina Woodruff...

Hello, thanks for sharing your poem. I've written a lot about depression.

Favorite line:Ā 
Broken and dead lost inside , pain once hidden I can no longer hideĀ 

To make it read better, I would tighten up the punctuation and capitalization since there are long sentences throughout.Ā 

There is one misspelling:Ā my storey (story) which is an easy fix.Ā 

Thank you for sharing your poem. Made me think about all the times I had dark thoughts. It took the combination of: diet, exercise, reaching out to loved ones, writing, medication and prayer to over come depression. However, I still become depressed, it's changed from total darkness to a window full of light shining in.Ā 

Good luck to you.Ā 

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