Pain or Pleasure..
So long i have waited to taste
So long i have waited your touch
So long for flesh upon flesh
I'm thirsty...shall i drink from the river edge?
Quench my thirst ..no longer needing to drink
from your fine ale?
Shall i taste the tempting words of the poet of lust?
For one night of passion....
Shall i let the wind blow me in a direction it pleases?
Too long i have waited for loves path to lead me ...
As i rise above the clouds with my soul intact
Will you forgive me if i stray beyond our written words?
Temptation.....break the boundry
Tease me into submission...
Poets love ?
Poets lust ?
So long have i waited ......
Can't feel the pain no more...
Let pleasure ..come knocking at my door..
Too long i have waited for
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Dear Poetess Tina Moore,
An excellent Write. Beautiful image. My applause, My Vote and my Nomination.
" Shall i let the wind blow me in a direction it pleases?
Too long i have waited for loves path to lead me ...
As i rise above the clouds with my soul intact
Will you forgive me if i stray beyond our written words?.."
A Read between the lines: The bondage between pain and pleasure in human behavior is as philosophical as it is multifaceted too. It is a divergence that lives in each of us and deserves our curiosity. Sadly, it is not unusual for us to close down to situations that we fear will bring pain and discomfort. Replacing our tendency of avoidance with a capacity for wonder when it comes to our pain associations with its bodily pleasure is an eye opener and has the potential to release an untapped capacity for pleasure. The ecstatic release of a deep pleasure, will in turn ignites an equal release of intense pain.
Regards
WILLIAMS GEORGE MAVELI
Thank you very much Williams Jl ,i appreciate the indepth read and between the lines -thank you Tina x
Congrats Poetess Tina Moore on you winning nomination. Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you Williams Jl Tina x
gorgeous passionfilled write tina well done x
Thanks susan for your lovely comment Tina x
Tina, i felt the heart wanting company, this was wrote like a true poet, some of your lines are to be admired. High 5 my friend.
Regards Mark.
PS nom well deserved and not just your a friend but your work is truly endearing. x
Mark thank you my friend and fellow poet.... i think my heart was in this one lol thanks for a beautiful comment Tina x
OMG, the pain is killing me cause the pleasure from this poem makes me want to turn dreams into reality. This was awsome very blissful and romantic.
wow!! Thank you Troy lol ,im loving your comment -let pleasure come knocking at both our doors .. Tina x