Poem -

Pain will die with me

Stripped from worth
Isolated from love
Pondering the days of all that was right
I sit here in the room of emptiness
In the cell of the lonely
Knowing that I am nothing but dust
Come to me lord
As I beg to you, no help has come
The girl in my heart yearns to be free
Laying no hand upon me
Yet leaving the marks on my soul
Marks that will never fade
For your words are acid to my ears
Poison to my soul
Casting me away
From what I believe is right
None of this could ever be fine
I seem perfectly okay
But your words have hit me
They have created a rope tied around my neck
And it's slowly choking to death
I am alone
I am afraid
I finally understand pain
My only companion
Today I understandĀ 
Pain will die with meĀ 
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tempemendivil

Ā  Ā Hello Tanya, great first write here, have you posted elsewhere before... My favorite line isĀ 

"Laying no hand upon me
Yet leaving the marks on my soul
Marks that will never fade" That is some good lines right there,very clever and descriptive... This is a seasoned good write all together, very well done, take good care:

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Tanya Lorenzana...

Thank you very much, no I haven't written anywhere else before this is my first time sharing my poetry.

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