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palace of rubble.

I watch you building a palace out of rubble,
Your empire burnt to the ground,
In life your one step,
Backwards,
Motion bound,
The foundation not sound,
Experimental evaluation,
Upon failings,
Cremation,
Ashes secretion abound,
Building in hollow vision,
No heartfelt supervision,
Clarity of thoughts shroud,
Living high amits the clouds,
No care,
Nor worry be,
No empire servant see,
A palace of ruins deception,
Nor sights stair see,
In brickworks empty space,
Expressionless with outstretched face, nor tears crying dry,
Your empire in burning sky,
No winged wings to fly.

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Amazing, Alluring verse, My applause, My vote

Ashes secretion abound,
Building in hollow vision,
No heartfelt supervision,
Clarity of thoughts shroud,
Living high amits the clouds,
No care,
Nor worry be,
No empire servant see,
A palace of ruins deception,
Nor sights stair see,
In brickworks empty space,
Expressionless with outstretched face, nor tears crying dry,
Your empire in burning sky,
No winged wings to fly.

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Nardine Sanderson

Warmest loving appreciation, thank you sir williamsji, love and respect, nardine Sanderson xoxo

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Ravindra Kumar

Opening lines are speculative,...peeping towards the dreamy sight,..not a real stroll...beautiful-

"I watch you building a palace out of rubble,

Your empire burnt to the ground,"

With Love,

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you kindly sweet ravindra, much love to you sweetheart, Nardine xoxo

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