Poem -
Pandordian
Unlocked notions in prayer
Transgressions all lay bare
A hazy puff of smoke
Vaporous harried evoke
In a chest of sanguine seams
Reveal a rift of surreal dreams
Endeavoring trespasses back
Penitent for things I lack
Curiosity has skinned its prey
Penance is the price I pay
Exposing the very sin
Contained in a heart within
Emptied of dark apathy
Enclosed a bit of alchemy
Radiant beams kaleidoscope
Nestled tis wisps of hope
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Comments
A deliciously twisted and enigmatic take on the ancient myth.
A "Radiant beams kaleidoscope"Β of (almost) familiar images seen through a poetic prism.
Vintage DARKLY!!
Kudos, Mistress Lisa.
J xxx
thank you Jason
Excellent....Happy.Valentine. ...always enjoy your work.....Peace...Thank You
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Cool stuff DARKLY!!...... staying in the "Heart of darkness"...... Like Franz Kafka....... even in darkness there is light.......ALL STARS!!.....VERY creative my friend....... smiles.....T xo ?
Hi Β Lisa IΒ felt as IΒ read a sadness Β in that boxΒ
of sins locked away,but there is a need for them to be let go of
A repentance,Β to live a happyΒ free lifeΒ
A Great thought provoking writeΒ
Best wishes Debs xx
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Lisa, happy post V day, (not a fan of the day, lol) Β I pinned this poem for further study, it is quite brilliant, opening up the heart of darkness, yet hinting of hope springs eternal, all-together beautiful and mysterious music for the senses....best wishes poetessΒ
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Dear Lisa,
Heavy-Heavy-Heavy
The depths of your beautiful words are never ending
Lovely metaphors
Phenomenal imagery
A virtuoso performance of "Pandordian"
Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Thank you