Poem -
Part I. As Stars
hunderts of shining bright stars
piercing through hunderts of dark skys
so much beautiful in the their light
and still the need to feel it up with bright
yellow, white
right next to us
right by our side
then all does blinding ornaments upĀ
giving the darkness it's contrast
are just a glimpse too far away
just a little not enough
not visible in day light
now not needed to be looked at, after all
no purposeĀ
though there shouldn't have been one, even so
Ā
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I read this but couldn't see much within it UNTIL I read the second part (the moon) which helped put this poem in context. SO ... having read them both I will award the stars in part II as, for me, these are part of the same poem. I do like them both but I feel they speak better together. Hope that makes sense x
Yes indeed they are part of the same poem, and still they are apart, and all for a reason within both.Ā
I'm glad you enjoyed reading and thank you.Ā
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