Poem -
Past of pain
Pain
Looking back on the past,
Pretending to laugh,
When your alone,
You realise you were laughing in pain,
There are no words,
No good way to say,
You have messed up my life,
I don't know if I should be blaming you,
I didn't scream,
I couldn't scream,
I should blame myself,
No more lies,
No telling them either,
No one except a few,
I am ashamed,
My fear is concurring me,
It's got control,
I don't know how to get it back,
I wish there was an easy way,
The pain of the past,
Is unavoidable I guess.
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Comments
Hi Krystal,Â
I'm having fun reading all your work!
The only suggestion I could offer is to elaborate more on the pain that you experienced. Just a thought, if you could bring it out more in your poem, it would stand out more. I like the format of the poem, the short lines helped move the story along. I found myself at the end, wanting to read more. Which is nice.Â
Have a great night.Â
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If i could tell my story i would but I cant, weather it be too hard for me or my brain is like self sabotaging or something, the words just dont make anything good to read
Hi Krystal ...the most powerful work in my opinion comes from the soul...again I can relate to your words and am familiar with the pain you speak of....hugs ?