Poem -
Paulina
Paulina, what are you looking for?
So long have I been here for you
I know your soul is full of troubles
What is there in my power to undo?
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Paulina, I breathe your name
My feelings of love are pure
only you can ignite my flame
Is my love just a one way door?
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Paulina, make me a handful of sand
To build your house of happiness
I ask for nothing, you hold the plan
Your contentment will be my wages
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Paulina, give me your world to carry
My hands were made for work like this
But, whatever you do is whatever will be
My words you can keep or simply dismiss.
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Comments
Beautiful write brother:) xoxo
Thanks my poetic sister from down under, I swore to myself that I won't redo one of my 'oldies' but was looking through my 2013 folder and came upon this one; just had to change the name, still surprisingly hard for me to read; weird
Appreciate the comment, Mirela....it's an old poem I came across and decided to post, I don't want to write another one like this, and hopefully I never will, glad you liked it my friend, cheers
Good write, I liked the below lines, my applause, my vote
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hey thanks, Williamsji, glad you like this old time poem; to me anything older than a week is 'old' and this one is about 2 years old, very appreciative of your comment, my friend
Thanks Cherie, very kind of you to say all that, my hands are shaking as I write (big Wrestle Mania fan just finished watching on pay per vies) oh this write was written for a woman I thought I was madly in love with, it's old (almost 2 years) originally had her name on it, what can I say sis. we live and learn in this life, and hopefully make better decisions as we do, I try my best to never get personal in poetry, but with this one maybe I'm simply trying to face my demons head on, who knows....not really sure why I posted it to be honest, perhaps I'm learning to share, I'll probably delete it before too long though, don't like seeing it, but I do appreciate the encouraging words thank you
Oh my Mamma Jamma!!......can't believe I missed this!!........stunning perfection in metering and formatting........but..........the "taking of my breath away!".............with the purity you captured here.....reminds me of just how great a poet you are............amazing my friend!!..........I think I read to many of your comments and your prose............because this...........is sweet perfection............love and rockets bro!!..........T xx
thanks Tony, hopefully one day, many years from now; God willing I'll grow to appreciate all the things you mentioned about this write....I'm so moved by what you wrote down my friend...right back to ya bro.
Oh wow Chris, I absolutely love this, such a beautiful write. I can literally feel the yearning desire felt as you wrote these words down. You are one talented poet my friend, that desire to light a lover's inner fire is definitely alive in this poem. You have earned my five star vote as well as favorite again, my friend. Keep it up I love your work
Sincerely
XxX Melissa <3
thanks Melissa, I really do appreciate the comment; I love your work too...cheers pal