Poem - 22 May 2021, 20:41

Perception

Before her my cup was half empty

While together our cup became totally full, from her half full cup added to my half empty cup , creating one

After her, our cup became hers and I left with an empty cup and a shit ton of OPTIMISM

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Marion22 May 2021, 23:12

Ha ...love the ending Rob...great little write...share sweet and packs a punch!! x

RG23 May 2021, 04:40

Thanks Marion , I’m glad you enjoyed. It felt empowering to write and makes me smile while reading . xo Rob

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