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Piece of Red Cloth

- Open your eyes, translated by Yiyan Han (c) 2020-11-21

Piece of Red Cloth

A popular Chinese rock’n’roll by Mr CUI Jian (哔偄) in 1980's and 90's. My initial translation finished on 2015-12-15. The ā€œred clothā€ in this song is a metaphor, and open to interpretation – so just let your imagination run free. The subtitle is added by theĀ translator.

On that day you covered my eyes
ā€˜n’ the sky with a piece of red cloth
Then you asked what I could see
I said I only saw happiness

This made me feel comfortable
ā€˜n’ let me forget I had nowhere to live
Then you asked where I wished to go
I said I’d rather follow you

I couldn't see you nor the road
ā€˜n’ my hands were also tied up
You asked what's in my mind
I said I’d follow your command

I could feel you weren’t made of iron
but were as hard ā€˜n’ brutal as steel
I could feel the blood flew in your veins
'cause your hands were pleasantly warm

This made me feel comfortable
ā€˜n’ let me forget I had nowhere to live
Then you asked where I wished to go
I said I’d rather follow you

I could feel this land wasn't bleak
though couldn't see it was dried up
I felt thirsty ā€˜n’ asked for water
but you shoved your mouth on mine

I couldn't walk away nor could cry
'cause my body was already dry
I wanted to be with you forever this way
'cause I most understood your agony

[trumpet]

On that day you covered my eyes
ā€˜n’ the sky with a piece of red cloth
Then you asked what I could see
I said I saw happiness
Ā 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

To me the red cloth was to require the spiritual eyes to be to see. Have a problem with forcing anything, but interesting poem! my humble opinion.......Jim

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Yiyan Han

Thank you, Jim. Yes, there is "forcing" meaning in the song. Like your idea of "spiritual" though, and a Christian believes God see everything.

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The fish of the sea

Communism Yiyan? That's how I see it, awesome writexĀ  I'd love to hear the original! Could we find it on YouTube? best wishes and stay safe my friend. TFOTSĀ 

Ā 

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Yiyan Han

One of interpretations - communist propaganda & control. Thanks for your interest,Ā TFOTS!

Mr Cui is recognised as the pioneerĀ of rock'n'roll in China.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l8UPST1ZKSw

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Liliana of the ...

Wow deep thank you so much forĀ  this poem . A wonderful read.Ā 

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