Poem - 19 July 2021, 11:28

Pieces

Each day is a piece
three-hundred and sixty-five
pieces in total

YEARLY

Every day counts
just as much as the other
so don’t lose any

DAYS

Time, is the one thing
IMPOSSIBLE to get back
so enjoy your life’s

PUZZLE

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Jim "The Lad" ....19 July 2021, 11:37

cool write Rob! In my faith everyone is part of the puzzle and we find a place for them. In the business world we are expendable, that is why I 'm so glad to be retired!.....................................................................................Jim

RG03 August 2021, 05:15

I can relate to the business world, I talk to so many clients of mine that retired early after 30 plus years because of pressure and politics . I do believe everyone deserves to have a place . Thanks for the feedback Jim.

Marion19 July 2021, 12:23

Wonderful write Rob X

RG03 August 2021, 05:15

Thank you Marion :)

The fish of the sea28 July 2021, 13:26

It's about time you received some well deserved acknowledgement of your work Rob. Fantastic and insightful poem. Enjoyed this one. Congrats on your nomination

RG03 August 2021, 05:16

Thanks Max , I greatly appreciate your kind words .

Pratibha Savani28 July 2021, 14:56

I love this Rob! Its awesome! Short and sharp and fun to read! Excellent piece. Pinned! Pxxx

RG03 August 2021, 05:17

Thank you so much Pratibha, I’m glad the sharpness bled through and you enjoyed it :)

Gwendoline04 August 2021, 03:19

Wise words indeed Rob and yay to your nomination :) You wield the pen consistently and with true soul searching motivation. I am so thrilled for you, this is a great piece x

RG04 August 2021, 16:37

Thank YOU Gwendoline ! ❤️