Poem -

Pink Cup

Shivering outside of a store
During winter to wait in the snow
Just so that you can clash with
Other exhausted sheep
Wanting the same
Flimsy pink cup that you
Saw trending on the internet

It is a reusable trinket, not diamonds
Or the secret to eternal youth
This pink plastic is proof
Of how animalistic we still are
If it is not Cabbage Patch Dolls
Or pet rocks with a leash
It is the latest phone or computer

Causing people to burn their money
That they need for rent, just to be cool,
Just to feel a sense of belonging
Putting yourself into the red
To follow a trend that won’t last
Why are we like this?

To want something is not a crime
But it has to be what you desire
Not what society expects you to buy
But an object that adds joy to your life
Not another bill to pay off later

Constantly chasing the wind
Falling deeper into wet sand
Following what is popular will leave
You as empty as that pink cup
The same pink cup that holds nothing of substance
In the end.

 

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K.G. Munro

The irony of this is these cups are made in China and probably contain heavy metals. 

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Lorna

Hello K.G
as humans want to keep up with everyone else and have the "latest" thing is the way inwhich we do it, when you look at the animal kingdom the strongest are the survivors
where we use money and things to exert dominance over each other to become the alpha or pack leader
made me think
Really interesting peice
Lorna xx

 

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K.G. Munro

Hey Lorna,

Thank you kindly, I think so too and it's sad. Trying to keep up like that, it never benefits a persons life. 

best wishes,
K.G. 

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author
sparrowsong

Hello K.G.

I find it more interesting when it's rare...

No one else it as if it's custom...

To me that's the coolest...

​​​​​​Copycats have never been my thing anyway...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

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author
K.G. Munro

Hey Sparrow,

Agreed, when something is unique it has value and wonder attached to it. Thank you :)

Love,
K.G. 

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author
Marion

'Constantly chasing the wind'
a perfect line and the perfect truth
Great write x

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author
K.G. Munro

Thank you kindly,

following trends is just a futile battle xx

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author
Marion

I can honestly say I never have...I'm a bit rebellious like that lol 
if someone tells me yellow is in fashion I'll wear blue 😄😄😊

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